blog 9

In class I like how we group up and talk about are papers. Each of us had to read are paper out loud and the other group member had to tell us how we should better our paper. I like it because I got to get a chance to hear what other people wrote and it gave me ideas what i should write or ways to put more details in it to make it longer. I got to talk to them about my paper on how to make the introduction longer, and for the middle we talk about how to put more detail into it. Like talk about the assignment and was it a two part grade, did u have to turn in a rough draft to get a grade. So all those details I added to my paper. And we also went over on how to end the paper and we should have in the paper by saying thank you for reading are paper and taking time to do so and to leave contact information for the teacher can get hold of you if they want to tell you something. Over all I like the feedback that I got back from my group.It really help me to make my paper sound better. And I also got to give them feedback on how I though there paper sounded and what feedback I could give them to make there paper sound better.I also learn that we couldn't make are paper sound emotional because it not right for this kind of essay. I'm just glad that I didn't have any of that in my paper or else I would have to write my whole paper all over. I hope we get to do this again if have other paper to do,it really helped