At the writing center

I went to the writing center to get feedback on how good my descriptive paper was. The guy that I had was a nice person not mean at all. He gave me good feedback on my paper. He read each line and sees how we can both make it sound better. We also fix the beginning of my paper. The thing that he said was wrong with it was me writing in the link and the title. What we did was move that part to the end. It sounds much better and it goes with the ending. I would of like him to go over and tell me if I had good detail or did I need more. We never worked on detail and I think I should have asked him to go over that with me. The one thing he helped me on the most was how I should of list the five facts about Alex. At first I just had it as like a number list but then we switch it up to putting it all together, using the words first, second, third, fourth, and fifth. On my paper was a lot of miss grammar. My tutor went over with me on how we can keep the same sentence, but put different words in it to make it sound better and not so confusing. The whole secession went good and I like the writing center. They help me out a lot to make my paper better.