time line

The time line we had to use was to help us on our descriptive paper. We had to break up into groups of two and help each other on making a time line. My partner helped me out a lot. The reason why he helped me out a lot is because he didn't have a vlog yet. We need to at least have five different paragraphs, with descriptive detail. The first part of the paper that we worked on was the beginning. It was the most easies part to start on. First we put the link to the video and the title. Then after that my partner started to ask me question like how did the boy look like, where was he at, how did his room look like. Basically my partner was asking me these questions to get more detail out of me and it work. I started to ramble on and on about how the boy looks from his colored eyes to what he was wearing and where he was at. After we started on the first part of the time line everything became easier thanks to my partner of course. He kept on asking me question, how did the boy sound like? Did he make a funny face when he said something? My partner really wanted detail. At one point my partner said to me, "I can image how this boy looks like we you describe him." The time line for me worked really well. It had a lot of my planning on it, not just from me but from my partner as well. The time line helped me separate five different paragraphs and what I wanted to talk about in those paragraphs without repeating myself. For my partner on the other hand, he didn't have a vlog so I wasn't able to help him as much. Instead of helping him on his paper I kind of helped him find a vlog. Over all it was great having a partner to help me with my time line because by myself I probably wouldn't know what to start with. And if my partner didn't ask me so many questions about my vlog I wouldn't have as much detail in my paper either.